Close by, I could hear his piercing howl. This Godforsaken being was closing in on his prey. I could just imagine what the victim was witnessing. A raw, ripped, and ravenous face with a gaping maw and bloodshot eyes. By now the a cursed thing would have the poor victim in his clutches. His blood encrusted finger nails would pierce any man's skin. He is almost finished; I can still hear the banshee like screams of his prey. Suddenly the scream breaks off. It is silent. I turn around and find my self face to face with the death taker. Neither of us move; I wince at the smell of his breath-The most horrific thing I have ever smelled in my life-Rotting corpses. He is everything I had imagined him to be. Realizing the danger, I turn to run.
Now the Observer becomes the prey.
LotR reading over the spring/summer
14 years ago
WOW Ari! Fabulous! I love your description, it spooked me.
ReplyDeleteMe too!!! That was awesome!!!
ReplyDelete-Maddie
My gosh, Ari...this description literally gave me chills! I literally found myself checking to make sure Grendel wasn't in the closet behind me, haha! Amazing job...really, really well-thought!
ReplyDeleteAwesome Ari! I love the "the Observer becomes the prey" part. If your the Observer though... then, well, good thing it's fiction!
ReplyDeletehow sweet that you would check your closet for me Glenn! I feel so LOVED! but I'm not there right now, but you can leave a message, as I'm on vacation in Anna's closet and will be back Tuesday! BEEEEEPP!
ReplyDeleteWow. You could seriously be a writer when you grow up! Very nice...and scary at the same time!
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